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'Intellectual Stimulation'

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Commission for :iconjonathans223: of his characters, Ishaaya the Dryad and Dr. Malan, the human.

Humans don't get their name's capitalized. Unless it's the first word in the sentence.

Ishaaya/Dr. Malan (c) :iconjonathans223:

Felarya is (c) :iconkarbo:


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PS: The title comes from a musical quote from the Disney version of "James and the Giant Peach". I adore Mr. Grasshopper~ :heart:

PPS: Thank you for the critique everyone =D My next big venture in artistic growth: Perspective! :dance:
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I figured I'd write up another critique, and I think this is a good opportunity to do so, if you're fine with it.

Okay, first, I love your style; everything's so pretty! But of course, it'd be a disservice if I gushed about that this whole time XD

First of all, the lighting. I see some beams of light coming down from the trees, but the top of her head is in shadows. Perhaps its the orientation of the light, but still, it looks a little weird o: Also, I'd expect to see more shadows under her roots, but maybe I'm wrong <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/>

Aaaalso, the perspective. Maybe I'm looking at it wrong, but the dryad and the trees seem to be oriented differently. The trees look straight-up, but the dryad is like semi-birdseyeish, whatever it's called XD

I do like the idea of this, though :3 (glasses are sexy >__> ) I'd say a glasses-wearing dryad reading a book is pretty original XD

Overall, it's a lovely picture. I enjoy seeing things like this from you ^^

...OH YEAH, I'm sure this was a personal pref, but her trunk looks kind of flimsy. Maybe it's the character, but to me, it's different from what I expect <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/> Doesn't really hurt the picture, though, but just bringing it up :3